The government’s investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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There is no doubt that some area requires more investment than other sectors.

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it is normal to see governments spend on art galleries, music institutions and theatres, in my opinion,basic infrastructures are required to be developed.

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is because

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would improve the standard of living and quality of life.

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, when the government funds the development of the nation, eventually,

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can uplift its citizens' lives as well.

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, these basic amenities are provided to meet the necessity.

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,If the authority constructs new roadways to a remote village, which will assist not only help the villagers to access to cities

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but allows them to do some trading as well.

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o afford modern facilities and can have gradual progress of the entire country.

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, spending money on these aesthetic buildings may not bring any drastic changes to the place as it can be benefited only a fraction of the society.

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, the impact on the general public is minimum since it is not capable of eliminating the needs of hunger, house and cloths.

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, in the UAE, they had given much focus on constructing big buildings, roadways, and hospitals, before squandering a huge amount on other sectors. They have proved they are right and currently one of the richest countries in the world despite their growth was gradual. In conclusion, people have a different view on how to channelise the government fund whether to develop infrastructure or spend another advancement. I strongly think they must fund trivial areas rather any other project.

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