Schools should teach children some academic subjects which will be beneficial to their future careers. Therefore, other subjects such as music and sports are not important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There has been a common assumption that young

people

need to have to good academic background to be considered successful.

Therefore

, some

people

believe that

music

class and P.E should

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from the curriculum so that totally on teaching academic subjects. I disagree with

this

opinion as both

music

lesson

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and physical education are essential for

students

in terms of daily life and future

career

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. Listening to

song

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songs

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and playing musical instruments can be beneficial for

people

's health,

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can lighten one's mood and alleviate boredom. Attending a concert or streaming melody online is a leisure activity that can help them forget their stressful work or study for a

while

, listening to light

song

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can reduce anxiety and enhance sleep quality.

Additionally

, rock shows differences between cultures, and encouraging

people

to play

music

can preserve the diversity of musical styles. Musical traditions differ from region to region, and there are substantial differences in musical instruments, rhythms, genres, beats, and lyrics.

While

western

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music

has gained in popularity throughout the world with pop

music

, rock

music

and blues heard everywhere, some traditional varieties of

music

are still alive in some parts of the world. In China,

for example

, some folk songs still have their fan base and there are musicians who attempt to keep these traditions alive.

Moreover

, the

music

industry can be a driver of economic growth. More

people

choose to go to the concert and pay an exorbitant amount

for watching

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the

music

shows of their favourite musicians.

Additionally

, singers and bands sell albums to make a huge profit or mementoes. For these reasons, the creative industry can create numerous jobs supporting musical performances and TV shows of talented musicians. In

this

sense, it can become a new engine of the economy. Physical Education helps

students

contributes

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to self -development, and shape. Since social competition is fierce, young children have all

reasons

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to achieve in-depth and comprehensive development in competitiveness. Physical exercises

such

as playing basketball or playing football involve multiple team

activity

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which emphasized heavily on teamwork communication skills, coordination ability, and organization capacity.

Therefore

, not only

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tone and body and firm up muscles but

also

can help

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them

to

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how

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to

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become

an

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excellent team member and master soft skills. Whenever conflicts happen in workplaces or other situations,

people

with team

sprites

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and soft skills which is befitting for their future job. Having PE or

music

class，by occupying spare time constructively， makes

students

contented, with no time for boredom.

To sum up

, It can't be denied that the young generation is under pressure to be successful today, in fact, they can

also

be successful in particle jobs like singers and

music

teachers, etc. Introducing

music

and PE

class

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classes

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into the school curriculum could，to some extent， assist

students

in realizing

overall

development and add spice to their dull routine of everyday life.