Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Technology

is expanding its wings faster than the speed of light. Humans are heavily dependent on

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nternet of things (

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IoT

). Smart devices are able to encroach into our homes and personal spaces. Many people believe that getting closer to

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technology

is helpful while others think that it has many drawbacks than positive impact. In

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positive

and negative sides of

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domination and conclude

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essay with my opinion. Human beings are using IT accessories for every activity, they required

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do in a day.

For instance

, cellphones are bridging the gap in communication around

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orld. Despite the

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, One can talk to family and friends anytime from anywhere. As

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health concerns are growing, fitness watches are helping us to curb the gap in the fitness regime. Its

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super easy

to calculate the calories intake and heart rate. It was almost impossible to keep many folks working during the

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pandemic

without

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technology

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support.

However

, someone is paying the price of

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and resulting in

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harmful

development

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society. As

technology

is growing, we as human are less connected in person and lacks many important people skills. The astronomical increase in usage of internet is resulting in fake news and division in the society. Lynching is common

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phenomenon

in many developing

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countries

. In

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, as humans are relying more on

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achine they are becoming lethargic and it leads to many life

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threatening

diseases. A study by MIT

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that as we use more smart machines we are

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losing

attention span and

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easy to distract kids. By comparing both sides of the argument, I believe that, If we as humans, can find the optimum amount of relationship with the

technology

, its beneficial for us.