Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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is expanding its wings faster than the speed of light. Humans are heavily dependent on

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nternet of things (

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is helpful while others think that it has many drawbacks than positive impact. In

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essay with my opinion. Human beings are using IT accessories for every activity, they required

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do in a day.

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, cellphones are bridging the gap in communication around

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orld. Despite the

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, One can talk to family and friends anytime from anywhere. As

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health concerns are growing, fitness watches are helping us to curb the gap in the fitness regime. Its

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support.

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society. As

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is growing, we as human are less connected in person and lacks many important people skills. The astronomical increase in usage of internet is resulting in fake news and division in the society. Lynching is common

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achine they are becoming lethargic and it leads to many life

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that as we use more smart machines we are

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easy to distract kids. By comparing both sides of the argument, I believe that, If we as humans, can find the optimum amount of relationship with the

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, its beneficial for us.

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