Currently, it is true that the demands for energy are becoming greater than ever and people are advised to find out new sources of natural gas in distant and isolated regions. While
this
has a number of benefits, I believe that these overshadowed by its disadvantages.
On the one hand, there are significant advantages of discovering oil reserves in faraway places. Linking Words
Firstly
, exploring energy resources would provide more employment opportunities for people living in these areas, which helps them to increase their income and improve their living standards. Linking Words
Secondly
, investing in these projects in isolated places could create considerable economic growth. Linking Words
For example
, oil prices have dramatically increased in recent days, and power factories conduct exploration projects in remote areas could make huge profits. Linking Words
Moreover
, the government would Linking Words
also
receive more tax revenues from these companies; Linking Words
therefore
, they could have more budget to spend on important sectors Linking Words
such
as public education, leading to sustainable development.
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On the other hand
, it seems to me that the drawbacks of Linking Words
this
development are more significant than its benefits. Because fossil fuel power stations built in these places could release a huge amount of toxic gas into the atmosphere, leading to air pollution and climate change, which pose a serious threat to the environment and citizens living in distant regions. Linking Words
Besides
, local people could suffer from various health problems like asthma or infectious diseases. Linking Words
Furthermore
, high levels of noise from mining projects and oil drilling operations are detrimental to people and wildlife in these places, causing stress and other serious mental problems and affect the animal in various waysLinking Words
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although
discovering and exploiting new sources of energy advantageous in some ways, I would argue that the disadvantages are more significant.Linking Words
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