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The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

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Internet is boon to humanity. It has not only linked people but has open certain opportunities for them. The greatest thing
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nternet has done is to provide people with ample information on their fingertips.
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it has become easy to be updated with
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atest trends. If we are not informed, we may take
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ecision which may not be correct. For
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example Google Maps,
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 people use it to find directions of their desired destination.
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people can find their destination in a new place
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they are facing problems due to language.
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nternet gives data, but these days a lot of false material is being spread. Due to many users available,
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intelligence is shared very fast among people. But the knowledge we are receiving is correct or not?
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, a messaging company What's App had issued an advertisement, to curb wrong news. To conclude
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ot of facts, but it is our responsibility as well to verify these facts and
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 only share them with others, as certain data are manipulated.
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