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some companies sponsor sports as way to advertise themselves, some people think is a good idea. others think that there are disadvantages

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while some people think that
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about
disadvantage
, others focus on advantages, in that essay, I'm going to talk
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about
 both opinions giving my point,
also
 I know that it is a polemic topic and I will respect all of
then
.
first
, in my point of view, most of the companies like
sponsor
 sports, when I watch game games I can see a lot of brands everywhere, I don't know how much
money
 they spend to stay there, but I think that it is not cheaper,
second
,
this
money
 from the famous companies, is really helpful to sports development,
however
, I can not imagine sports without
money
 and good sponsors working together.
on the other hand
, people that talk
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about
disadvantage
, they say that some people just practise sport thinking
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about
money
,
for example
,soccer player, they use to choose a team to play just look at salary,
that is
 a disaster when people just play sports for
money
. another
disadvantage
, when
sponsor
 sports that, there is a lot of companies doing the same thing,
however
, if another company do something different and new, maybe it will be better for they to advertise.
finally
, the most important way to decide
sponsor
 something is checking if it will be helpful or
disadvantage
, from my view, companies have to analyse the brand and decide which sport they will
sponsor
, nowadays,to be honest, to be famous is necessary spend
money
 advertising sports and another thing.
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