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Tourism is increasing day by day in nations. What are the affects on environment by tourism and what are the solution to curb these problems?

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In modern era, due to technology advancement and accretion of inter-countries connectivity has increasing the exploration across the globe. It is growing rapidly.
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, globetrotting has myriad benefits to the economy. Correspondingly,it has negative impacts on surroundings
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 as, depletion of natural resources. The plausible reasons with reference and solutions will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs. To open the deliberation, what are the affects on habitants? The
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 tenable aetiology is, With the enlarging number of conventional travel poses potential threats to many natural areas in the world
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 as: depletion of local resources,increased pollution, discharges into the sea, natural habitat loss and so on.
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,
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 industry generally overuses water resources for hotels, swimming pools, golf courses and personal use by tourists.
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 can result in degradation of It. In drier regions, like the Mediterranean, scarcity of drinking water is of particular concern. Because of the hot climate and the tendency for tourists to consume more drink when on holiday than they do at home. On the paradoxical sides, owing to, Impacts of travel on Environment , the government should take regulatory measures promote touristry without harming the climate. They should implement strict law to avoid sewage. Authorities can
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 collect enterance fees from tourists and tour operators for conservation activities.
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, environmental awareness can
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 be helpful, when tourists are brought closer to tourist attractions , they develop a heightened awareness to those areas. To illustrate, Monument Valley Tours will take tourists through a kind of landscape while explaining the history and traditions of the area. The tour helps visitors gain a new appreciation and brings them closer to Natural resources. To Recapitulate, It has pros and cons simultaneously. It has immensely influenced our economy. It has adverse impact on habitat too
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 as degradation of lands, scarcity of natural resources, air and noise pollution. Whereas, necessary blend of cure will mitigate the problems.
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, ministry should take stricted actions to safeguard the surroundings despite hampering the touristry.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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