As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign language is a waste of time? To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Technology has reduced manual human efforts to a great extend. Some people think that

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there is no need to learn

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language

since by using a

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one can translate and understand foreign speech.

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Firstly

the

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technology can be helpful to translate thousands of pages within

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ew minutes. It can

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human efforts and can work anywhere. Using a

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ingle script in multiple

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ew hours. As per the data collected by IBM, an online translator can reduce 80% of

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man power

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. The accuracy of online translation is 75% more than the manually performed translation.

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, there is a loss in the job demand of

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80% employee as per the data collected by the Times of India in

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ear 2019. The

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text. The person can use online translator application to translate and later manual checking can be performed.

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language

pupil will not only become multilingual but

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, it will enhance their confidence. Being a bilingual the people will

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receive global job offers. The customs and rituals will be easily understood by

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multilangauge

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speakers. To conclude, I completely disagree that pupils should stop learning

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tools.

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, folks should learn new speeches to increase individual knowledge.

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As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign language is a waste of time? To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

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Should Children be encouraged to be competitive in sports and other activities? Or is it better for them to learn the benefits of co-operating with other people? Discuss both these views and give your own answer.

Young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in cities.what are the reasons? Do advantages of their developmenth outweigt it's disadvantages

Financial education should be included as a mandatory subject in schools to prepare students for managing money effectively. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that school children should study history as a main subject. Others think that others subject are more important for children in modern society. Discuss the both views and give your opinion.