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Some people are of the opinion that being highly qualified is the only way to ensure a well-paying job. While others believe that having work experience is the best way to get a well-paying job. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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There is an ongoing debate wherein a considerate set of
soceity
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society
 advocates that we should observe a lockdown type off-
day
 for all vehicular traffic on a monthly basis.
This
 essay will
firstly
 highlight the advantages
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this
 approach and
then
 it will throw some light on the drawbacks we may face as a direct impact of
this
 decision. Many countries
world wide
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 have a dedicated off-
day
 every month, there are several hidden advantages behind
this
 observed holiday,
such
 as with absolutely no cars on the road for one
day
 every month you will discover that the air quality index improves substantially. In
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comparative
 to the amount of traffic and emissions
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 on the roads by keeping a planned off, you are giving nature the much required
day
 to recuperate.
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this
day
 is an additional
day
besides
 the stipulated Sunday's
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 every month which enables families to spend quality time with each other, and
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 rewarding to have an off
day
 wherein you can have absolutely no chores done either as you are not permitted to take your car out.
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by putting
such
 a rule in place we are risking our emergency services like healthcare and fire department. As you have put a
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 situation even medical staff may take it easy that
day
 and someone's life could be at risk because of the same.
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every holiday wherein the industries and factories are shut there is a considerable hit to our economy and reserves. Most of these industries are planned to function without any halt in services and even a slight delay in production may impact our reserves substantially. We can
thus
 summarize
this
 essay by noting that even though an off-
day
 can be substantially
benefical
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beneficial
 to the health of our environment and workforce, it can have an adverse and negative effect on our economy and emergency services.
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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Highly qualified
  • Well-paying job
  • Securing
  • Knowledge
  • Expertise
  • Higher positions
  • Higher salaries
  • Practical skills
  • Real-world setting
  • Employers value
  • Professional connections
  • Ideal
  • Industry
  • Job role
  • Opinion
  • Experience
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