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Some people think newspaper is the most effective way to obtain the latest information because it has more influence than other forms of media. Do you agree or disagree?

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In today's fast-growing world, technology has risen exponentially in every field. Most people prefer to read the news in traditional ways
such
 as newspapers as they are more trustworthy . In my opinion,
although
 newspapers are the conventional way to get the latest information and news,
however
, other forms of media
such
 as online news or radio have more influence. The predominant factors resulting in people opting for newspapers over other forms of media are traditions and trust.
In other words
, newspapers are being delivered at our doorstep from a very long
time
 and reading newspapers have become a tradition in some cultures as well.
Additionally
, young children see their parents and grandparents reading news which creates trust in newspapers in them.
For example
, when I was a kid and see my father reading a newspaper and telling me about the world, I used to feel that everything in them is true.
However
, the main reasons why some people prefer reading online news are free of cost and the latest information.
First
 of all, people can download online news for free and do not have to wait for it to be delivered. They can just login in the website and scroll the latest news within seconds at any
time
 of the day.
Additionally
, the news published on websites get refreshed every
second
 and one can read it at the same
time
 but for newspapers,you have to wait for the
next
 day. There are few websites that can post fake news but one can ignore them and read news from the authentic news sites only. In conclusion,
although
 newspapers have been used for a long period of
time
 as they are trustworthy.
However
, I believe other forms of media provide
b
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