Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems To what extent do you agree or disagree ?Other major do you think my effective?

It is irrefutable that raising the price of

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is a good way to solve the expanding traffic and pollution problems . vehicles become huge problems , both in cities and on motorways everywhere .

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control traffic due to higher prices of

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people reduce the uses of vesicles they use public

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to save their money when people useless

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10 traffic automatically becomes less on the road pollution coming from the cars bikes when is it

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public start by the electrical cars and bike with our environmentally friendly and higher efficiency in the average and maintenance of these cars are very rather than

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cars

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save the fossil fuels for the future generation uses

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every coin has two faces is 45 and another one is negative due to increase in the cost of

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those working in the taxes car rental companies going on big losses because the extension cost of

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they increase their fare are prices

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people stop using their facilities individual use public

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to save money airlines and water.

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and trains are very expensive for going out of the city for tourism it is not each and every person in

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society In my conclusion the government should reduce the cost of airways and trains and waterways these facilities are

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available in each and every city of the country people should use easily