As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign language is a waste of time? To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Technology has reduced manual human efforts to a great extend. Some people think that there is no need to learn a new
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since by using a
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one can translate and understand foreign speech.
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essay will discuss, why learning a new tongue is always beneficial.
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, technology can be helpful to translate thousands of pages within a few minutes. It can
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reduce human efforts and can work anywhere. Using a
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one can translate
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ingle script in multiple
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in a few hours. As per the data collected by IBM, an online translator can reduce 80% of the manpower. The accuracy of online translation is 75% more than the manually performed translation.
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, due to the availability of the technology, there is a loss in the job demand of an 80% employee as per the data collected by the Times of India in the year 2019. The
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has taken place of a human.
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, a
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pages are required to be re-checked by the human for 100% error-free text. The person can use online translator application to translate and later manual checking can be performed.
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, by learning a new
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pupil will not only become multilingual but
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, it will enhance their confidence. Being a bilingual the people will
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receive global job offers. The customs and rituals will be easily understood by multilanguage speakers. To conclude, I completely disagree that pupils should stop learning a new
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, because of the presence of online translation tools.
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, folks should learn new speeches to increase individual knowledge.
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