You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there. Write to the tourist information office. In your letter: • explain what you need • say when you plan to be there • ask for information about prices Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr/Ms __________
#holiday #singapore #rent #apartment #tourist #information #office #plan #prices #mr #ms #__________
Dear Mr/Ms
I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am Tom Ferdi and I have planned a vacation to Singapore for two weeks with my girlfriend. I would like to rent a luxury apartment with one bedroom close to city
because I do not have much time to spend on travel. I really appreciate Add an article
the city
if
I Correct pronoun usage
it if
will
be able to get a place with all the access.
I have planned my holiday Wrong verb form
would
on
Change preposition
for
15th
of June, and we hope to come there on Correct article usage
the 15th
17th
of June because we expect to stay two nights in a hotel room. As I know June is not a Correct article usage
the 17th
peek
period for tourists and we will be able Correct your spelling
peak
check
in on time.
Add the particle
to check
Furthermore
, I would like to know about the prices of holiday apartment
for two weeks and Fix the agreement mistake
apartments
ot
would be great if you could offer some discount on us. One of my best friends recommended and I hope everything will be smooth. I would Correct your spelling
it
also
want to know the price Change preposition
for
with
breakfast and dinner.
I am looking forward Change preposition
for
Change preposition
to
from
your reply and once I get Change preposition
to
Correct article usage
apply
the
all the details, I will confirm the booking.
Yours sincerely
Tom FerdiCorrect article usage
apply
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coherence cohesion
Consider breaking down long sentences into shorter ones to enhance readability.
coherence cohesion
Organize your request more clearly by separating the sections with paragraph breaks, especially when mentioning the dates, needs, and price inquiry.
task achievement
The letter covers all the essential points: explaining the need, indicating the planned dates, and asking for price information.
task achievement
The tone of your letter is polite and suitable for the context, reflecting a good level of formal writing.
coherence cohesion
Your opening and closing are appropriately formulated, creating a good impression.