Reducing global environment damage should be handled by governments rather than individuals. To what extent agree or disagree?
Global warming has increased at rapids rates affecting humans and the environment. While some believe that it should be the states duty to control the damage, I disagree and feel that we as citizens of the world, have a huge part to play in order to reduce waste and the environmental damage.
Firstly
, the main reason to
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we as individuals should ensure that we recycle whatever materials we have Remove the comma
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instead
of constantly throwing away resources. Also
, by ensuring that we sort them according to wood, plastic and paper simply makes
it simpler to be forwarded into bins that are meant for recycling. Change the verb form
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For instance
, in Singapore, there are recycling bins provided to people by the state. This
is forwarded to plants that separate and reuse the material for various purposes. If everyone contributed and did their part in sorting out their trash, wastage would be greatly reduced.
Another possible way that we could do our part is to reduce our dependancy
on privately owned vehicles. Automobiles are known for the carbon emissions that Correct your spelling
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contributed greatly to the increasing Change the verb form
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tempreture
of the climate. We should, Correct your spelling
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instead
, utilise the
public transport to reduce the carbon footprint from the use of cars. Remove the article
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Furthermore
, the harmful gas emssions
from vehicles are known to cause Correct your spelling
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respitory
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respiratory
such
as asthma and lung cancer. If there are fewer cars on the roads, there will be less pollution.
To conclude, I disagree that the responsibility of looking after our environment is the states. We should all work together and with our combined efforts, the rate of pollution and damage would be greatly reduced.Submitted by sanjani_basdeo on
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