Every day traffic seems to get worse on our roads. How can we reduce the number of cars on our roads today? What alternatives can we offer car drivers?
Ever since the transportation companies revolutionized affordable it is, undeniably, causing the putting a higher tax on
vehicle
to the public, many people preferred to drive with their own cars to travel. It offers comfort and privacy compared to travelling with public transportation Use synonyms
such
asLinking Words
,
buses, trains, and trams. Remove the comma
apply
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This cause
Change the determiner
This cause traffic problem
These cause traffic problems
traffic
problems on the roads and may lead to carbon emission pollution as well. There are several suggestions to decrease the Use synonyms
number
of cars on the roads that will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
With the growth of low-cost cars in the marketUse synonyms
Add a comma
,
number
of vehicles on the Use synonyms
road
increase more the Use synonyms
road
capacity. Numbers of regulations can be imposed by the Use synonyms
government
to reduce the purchasing power of the automobile market, Use synonyms
for instance
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Add a comma
,
vehicle
prices, regulate a minimum passenger Use synonyms
number
, and plate Use synonyms
number
-based Use synonyms
traffic
control. Use synonyms
Firstly
, despite the growth of affordable cars, it is still considered as a luxury Linking Words
goods
. Correct the article-noun agreement
good
Thus
, the Linking Words
government
can put a higher tax when someone is going to buy the car from the dealer. Use synonyms
Secondly
, they could put a base on Linking Words
m
inimum Add an article
the
number
of passengers required in a Use synonyms
vehicle
if they wanted to use the main Use synonyms
road
at rush or peak hours. Use synonyms
For example
, in Bandung, Indonesia, a minimum of 4 passengers required for a car to use one of their busiest streets from 5:00 am to 10:00 am and from 4:00 pm to 8:00 pm. Linking Words
This
regulation eventually forces the people to have 4 passengers, Linking Words
otherwise
, they have to wait until the period is over or re-reroute. Linking Words
Thirdly
, in Jendral Sudirman street, in Jakarta’s central business district, the governor imposes an odd-and-even Linking Words
number
of plates to take turn in using the Use synonyms
road
in designated period as in Bandung. Use synonyms
This
rule aims to reduce the Linking Words
traffic
Use synonyms
number
by matching the end of the plate Use synonyms
number
with the current date to know weather it is an odd or even Use synonyms
number
.
To conclude, there are several ways the Use synonyms
government
can make the Use synonyms
traffic
to be better with imposing regulations. Use synonyms
However
, there are Linking Words
also
other ways as the alternatives that can be offered to the car drivers. Linking Words
Firstly
, riding a bike to work can help the drivers to be more active and contribute to reduce the air pollution. Linking Words
Secondly
, carpooling with your colleagues/friends who are going to the same area which can reduce the numbers of cars on the Linking Words
road
. Use synonyms
Thirdly
, there are various public transportation that are readily available to ride. With these alternatives, Linking Words
government
could help by injecting more funds in bicycle Use synonyms
road
and improve the public transports. With being conscious about our need in using a motor Use synonyms
vehicle
, I believe we can reduce the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
traffic
and pollution together!Use synonyms
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