Every day traffic seems to get worse on our roads. How can we reduce the number of cars on our roads today? What alternatives can we offer car drivers?
Ever since the transportation companies revolutionized affordable it is, undeniably, causing the putting a higher tax on
vehicle
to the public, many people preferred to drive with their own cars to travel. It offers comfort and privacy compared to travelling with public transportation such
as,
buses, trains, and trams. Remove the comma
apply
This cause
Change the determiner
This cause traffic problem
These cause traffic problems
traffic
problems on the roads and may lead to carbon emission pollution as well. There are several suggestions to decrease the number
of cars on the roads that will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
With the growth of low-cost cars in the marketAdd a comma
,
number
of vehicles on the road
increase more the road
capacity. Numbers of regulations can be imposed by the government
to reduce the purchasing power of the automobile market, for instance
Add a comma
,
vehicle
prices, regulate a minimum passenger number
, and plate number
-based traffic
control. Firstly
, despite the growth of affordable cars, it is still considered as a luxury goods
. Correct the article-noun agreement
good
Thus
, the government
can put a higher tax when someone is going to buy the car from the dealer. Secondly
, they could put a base on m
inimum Add an article
the
number
of passengers required in a vehicle
if they wanted to use the main road
at rush or peak hours. For example
, in Bandung, Indonesia, a minimum of 4 passengers required for a car to use one of their busiest streets from 5:00 am to 10:00 am and from 4:00 pm to 8:00 pm. This
regulation eventually forces the people to have 4 passengers, otherwise
, they have to wait until the period is over or re-reroute. Thirdly
, in Jendral Sudirman street, in Jakarta’s central business district, the governor imposes an odd-and-even number
of plates to take turn in using the road
in designated period as in Bandung. This
rule aims to reduce the traffic
number
by matching the end of the plate number
with the current date to know weather it is an odd or even number
.
To conclude, there are several ways the government
can make the traffic
to be better with imposing regulations. However
, there are also
other ways as the alternatives that can be offered to the car drivers. Firstly
, riding a bike to work can help the drivers to be more active and contribute to reduce the air pollution. Secondly
, carpooling with your colleagues/friends who are going to the same area which can reduce the numbers of cars on the road
. Thirdly
, there are various public transportation that are readily available to ride. With these alternatives, government
could help by injecting more funds in bicycle road
and improve the public transports. With being conscious about our need in using a motor vehicle
, I believe we can reduce the number
of traffic
and pollution together!Submitted by tesa_trb on
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