You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ................. ,

Dear
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Brown, I am a student of Marketing class in your section B. I am writing
this
to inform you that I can not continue the
course
I have started
last
week as the
course
is
whole
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theory based
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and I do not get enough time to finish my assignments. Actually, I am working full-time for a sales representative company as a leader for the team. My job is to provide them
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to a particular goal. It is a lot of work in terms of reporting. I make reports every evening regarding the whole day performance to inform my boss. I have decided to discontinue
this
program for
this
term but will try if I can continue it
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next
semester if the situation fluctuates. I have
also
checked with the administration office to hold my
course
to
next
term because I meet the eligible period of withdrawing a
course
. I hope you will understand my situation.
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sincerely, Rajveer
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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