You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Garbage is one of the main threat to
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ealth of folks. These days, Waste
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a big concern for garbage pickers as well as for the government because it
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major environmental problems. There are various factors which
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this
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of a human being. I am going to discuss two main reasons in below paragraphs which are,- Product attraction and Increased amount of packaging material.
Firstly
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of us are so careless in terms of money and time. Most
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b
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odies purchase what attracts them, they don't care if its
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or not. Many people are shop holistic while some are time and money bound. .
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- I went to a shop
last
week to buy a table for my study room, after searching a lot I found a perfect table for myself. The shopkeeper convinced me to buy a chair as well which matches the table which I didn't
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. I
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throw
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away my old chair and placed a new one which made garbage.
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, the ways of packing
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so much. If you order something online it comes as
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original box, a bubble packaging and a coverage box, which is
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for the product but is not necessary if the item is very small.
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ordered a facewash from Amazon, and it was packed in
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original clean and clear packing,
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there was a bubble packing and a big box when my item was only finger sizes which is hilarious. In an
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, I would say
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overnment should start charging a particular amount of fees per bin so that they think before buying unnecessary or throwing extra garbage,
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govt. should motivate people to open
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shop for old furniture. It will help
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ommunity.
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