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Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet. What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved?

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A healthy
diet
 contains multivitamins and a variation of
minimals
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minimal
. people who commit to a certain
diet
,
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 will always be satisfied. In modern societies, people tend to have a healthy
diet
 in order to be more energetic;
however
, it may seem it is challenging to get there.
this
 essay will mention one reason which is junk cooking and how
this
 problem can be countered.
first
 of all, fast
food
 has been attacking all different ages.
In other words
, junk
food
 is greatly consumed because of the variation in fast-
food
 restaurants.
for instance
, the Guardian journal has shown that the consumption of burgers has been seen in youngsters and that lead to
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ncrease in the number of obese kids.
Moreover
,
this
 could impact their well-being which can cause heart attacks or thrombus formation.
nevertheless
,
this
 can be combated by governmental or individual efforts.
moreover
, officials can minimise the number of restaurants by increasing taxes.
as a result
, less sat
food
 providers would exist. for the individual, parents should regulate the number of eating from those restaurants, by establishing
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 able which can count how many meals remain for everyone. 
In addition
, people should be educated of the harmless of
such
food
 and how that may affect their health.
moreover
, School must contain healthy
food
, by that , we reducing the exposure and that would help the efforts to be collected together because one hand doesn't clamp. To sum up, people who face that challenging maintaining a healthy
diet
 have different reasons. They should be more aware of the risk regarding
such
food
. Exercising would be
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ood solution if they can't give up eating fast
food
.
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