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Fast food is a part of life in many places. Some people think this has bad effects in lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree?

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Fast
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 has become one of the most essential parts of life in many societies. It is argued that
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onsumption of fast
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 can harm one’s lifestyle and eating habits. I completely agree with the opinion that eating processed
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 has
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ad impact on our everyday life.
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, regular and uncontrolled consumption of fast
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 can lead to obesity and other diseases.
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 of fast
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 chains
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 basing their menus on fried and ultra-processed
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, where the calorie count of one item can often reach a daily norm.
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, the nutrients contained in common junk
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 dishes are carbohydrates,
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polyunsaturated
 fats and
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utrageous amount of cholesterol. Along with causing heart diseases and blood circulation problems, these nutrients are the number-one factors that lead to obesity.
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 study showed that 60% of
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bese population worldwide gained weight
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 of their unhealthy eating habits.
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, in the
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 society is obsessed with saving
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, so the idea and concept of convenient
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seems
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 to be fitting and efficient. Whereas I reckon, that people should focus on their relationship with
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, as it is the most vital part of our lives. Scientists have been studying the correlation between the
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 spent on consuming meals and its
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 digestion. The study showed, that those, who ate for a longer period of
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 experienced faster digestion of nutrients and less bloating afterwards.
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, focusing on your diet implies overall stability of mental health. In conclusion, I strongly agree that convenient
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 is harmful, as it leads to serious illnesses and the short
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, spent while eating fast
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, has a poor impact on one’s mental and digestive health.
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