Some people think competitive sports, such as football, are valuable because they can gather people with different ages and culture together. Some think it can cause problems because people are from different groups and countries. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

On the one hand, when players from different nations would create certain issues, especially, in competitive games.
This
is because the culture and concept of these groups may be very different, eventually when a country fails in a sport would develop
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which is extremely dangerous and the impact may be undesirable.
For instance
, Cricket match between India and
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is a kind of war for many people, even, between each
teams
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. In
this
scenario, the game is not just considered as a form of entertainment, citizens take it so seriously. On the one hand, when players from different nations would create certain issues, especially, in competitive games.
This
is because the culture and concept of these groups may be very different, eventually when a country fails in a sport would develop
anymousity
Correct your spelling
animosity

The word anymousity is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

which is extremely dangerous and the impact may be undesirable.
For instance
, Cricket match between India and
Pakisthan
Correct your spelling
Pakistan

The word Pakisthan is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

is a kind of war for many people, even, between each
teams
Change to a singular noun
team

The singular quantifier each is followed by the plural noun teams. Consider changing the noun to the singular or using a different quantifier.

show examples
. In
this
scenario, the game is not just considered as a form of entertainment, citizens take it so seriously.On the one hand, when players from different nations would create certain issues, especially, in competitive games.
This
is because the culture and concept of these groups may be very different, eventually when a country fails in a sport would develop
anymousity
Correct your spelling
animosity

The word anymousity is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

which is extremely dangerous and the impact may be undesirable.
For instance
, Cricket match between India and
Pakisthan
Correct your spelling
Pakistan

The word Pakisthan is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

is a kind of war for many people, even, between each
teams
Change to a singular noun
team

The singular quantifier each is followed by the plural noun teams. Consider changing the noun to the singular or using a different quantifier.

show examples
. In
this
scenario, the game is not just considered as a form of entertainment, citizens take it so seriously.
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