1. Some people say that too much time and resources are spent on the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Well,it is always argued that a lot of time and money are spending for the safety and security of wild animals as their numbers are decreasing day by day.To some extent,I agree with the given statement.
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of all,it is considered that if wild spices are in risk and human interference is the biggest reason for it ,due to illegal hunting and destruction of forests and natural resources,the ministry is paying a big extent of wealth to save the life of wild animals.So,people are not stopping to kill animals some times for their entertainment and some times for food.As everybody knows hunting is banned everywhere but people are continuously destroying their nature maybe because of the lack of strict laws.
That is
why authority is spending expenses to provide them with safe places so that they can survive without any danger and fear of human attacks.
Secondly
,it can be said that so many animal homes like zoos are created for wild birds and animals and ministry is paying their food and security.But,if wild animals and birds would be safe and human beings will stop doing hunting and destruction of plants and animals,
then
they can save
this
huge load of wealth and priceless pace,SO if people are saying that why
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nion is paying so much for
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animals and birds
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it must be said that they are responsible for
this
loss by their self.And ,another factor of these expenses is that some types of animals and birds are about to end,so,it is
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the cause of concern for ministry to pay that much on them.
On the other hand
,wild animal and birds are
also
an important part of the atmosphere and it is their natural right as human beings on earth for their survival,So if
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some extent of wage is spending on them for their safe survival,it is not a wastage of space and
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the thing to understand that they
also
need food and they
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have some needs to live alive as they are
also
living to be. In the end,it can not be neglected that valuable time and income are paying for the survival of animal and birds but it fares enough in some ways as they
also
have some essential needs and their safety is a must.
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