Write a letter to the school to apply to be a volunteer. In the letter: – Introduce yourself and give details of your children who attend the school – Explain why you are interested in the position – Talk about any relevant experience that you have with children

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Hello, I am writing in regard to the volunteer position

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the school's annual fair. My children Mike and Jack Pattins are studying in the 3 and 5 grades respectively and I work at an event management company that organises corporate events. School fairs can be difficult to manage, due to the plethora of children and parents around. Since the offered position is closely related to my work, I would like to use

this

opportunity to contribute and assist the school. It's

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an opportunity, where I could get to know other parents and learn a few things in return. I have had abundant experience in managing events similar to

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, which more often

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that

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not, involves taking care of children and organising events in a

child friendly

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manner. My experience would

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come

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in other aspects of the event, ranging from security

mesuares

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measures

, staff management, and on-stage

techinical

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support. I have attached a list

about

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the types of shows I organise for your

persual

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. Looking forward to your positive response. Regards, Raj Kothrapalli.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

175 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Dedicated volunteer
Community engagement
Positive impact
Youth mentorship
Skills development
Educational journey
Extracurricular activities
Meaningful contribution
Enriching experiences
Collaborative spirit
Flexibility and adaptability
Child welfare and safety

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

All parents want the best opportunities for their children. There are some people who think that school teaches children a skill but others think having a range of subjects is better for the children's future. Discuss both sides.

Dome people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in other countries. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

You visited a hotel last week and left some items behind. Write a letter to the manager stating 1. Details of your stay 2. How important the items are to you 3. How you would want the items to the sent to you

Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?

Many companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think this is good for the world of sports, while others think there are disadvantages of this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion