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Write a letter to the school to apply to be a volunteer. In the letter: – Introduce yourself and give details of your children who attend the school – Explain why you are interested in the position – Talk about any relevant experience that you have with children

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Hello, I am writing in regard to the volunteer position
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 the school's annual fair. My children Mike and Jack Pattins are studying in the 3 and 5 grades respectively and I work at an event management company that organises corporate events. School fairs can be difficult to manage, due to the plethora of children and parents around. Since the offered position is closely related to my work, I would like to use
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 an opportunity, where I could get to know other parents and learn a few things in return. I have had abundant experience in managing events similar to
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 manner. My experience would
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 in other aspects of the event, ranging from security
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 support. I have attached a list
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 the types of shows I organise for your
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. Looking forward to your positive response. Regards, Raj Kothrapalli.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Dedicated volunteer
  • Community engagement
  • Positive impact
  • Youth mentorship
  • Skills development
  • Educational journey
  • Extracurricular activities
  • Meaningful contribution
  • Enriching experiences
  • Collaborative spirit
  • Flexibility and adaptability
  • Child welfare and safety
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