A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter, describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts say how you think the company should spend the money
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Dear Sir,
I would like to profoundly thanks your organization for the decision to spending a huge amount of money for a good fare
of
society.
I immensely appreciate your readiness to sponsor a youngster's sports team or alternatively to organize two public concerts. I am writing Change preposition
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undoubtedly, Financial support to children sports Change preposition
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will be a notable advantage for the team and your Fix the agreement mistake
groups
business
. with this
sponsorship,they will surely get training from expert trainers which will develop their potential and promote your brand. In future,they may bring glory in professional competitions to make us proud as a community.
On the other hand
, arranging two public concerts also
a joyful idea. Actually,nowadays due to busy life schedules individuals don't get a chance for gettogether parties. Add a missing verb
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will definitely bring them joy, merriment as well as to overcome their life stress.It certainly will promote our culture and heritage dance and music.A local business
will get a platform to promote your business
which will help you in future to build a business
chain.
Undeniably, your innovative thoughts will serve our soci,ety greatly. However
, Supporting kids sports teams has a more eminent result as compare to escalating the music and dance fans by concerts.Although
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a significant number of people will come to enjoy Remove the comma
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joyous functions and this
would be temporary, Support for juveniles will be remembered for long
time which will benefit you as well as them.
once again thank you for a commendable initiative.
yours faithful,
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,