In many countries, plastic containers have become more common than ever and are used by many food and drink companies. Do you think the advantages outweighs the disadvantages.

Plastic
usage
is becoming inevitable in today's lifestyle. Even people aware of the
damage
it causes to the earth and climate, they can't stop using it in various forms. Most of the countries still using
plastic
containers, bottles to pack
food
and drinks which is causing
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unreversible
damage
to
nature
. I believe
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people are ignoring
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side effects to use it in their everyday
life
.
This
essay will discuss how the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of
plastic
usage
. There are a lot of advantages which make people use
plastic
. Few of them are cost-effective, high durability, long
life
, weightless and less reactive.
Plastic
items are so affordable, anyone can buy them. Restaurants and many other
food
industries use
plastic
boxes to pack
food
because they can buy those boxes so cheap. They are elastic in
nature
so not usually break. Their long
life
is one of the biggest advantages because it never degrades for years.
Plastic
boxes or bottles never adds any weight to the packing, mostly they weight few ounces so that they are easy to carry. All these advantages made
plastic
so prominent in the packing industry. All these advantages never balance the
damage
it causes to
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nvironment. Because of its stable
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it takes hundreds of years of
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mall piece of
plastic
to degrade into soil.
This
is
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very dangerous to other animals and
nature
. A lot of sea
life
is becoming extent because of eating
plastic
in oceans. Scientists are warning
usage
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of the
plastic
is very harmful to the earth and it one of the reasons for global warming. The gases it releases when it is burnt can
damage
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zone layer it is very harmful to breathe. All these disadvantages are forcing governments to educate people on
plastic
usage
and stop using it. To conclude, It's everyone's responsibility to protect
nature
. We should make habit of using
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recyclable
plastic
or carrying our own bags to avoid
plastic
. All companies should pack their
food
and drinks in recycled
plastic
or in glass bottles. Governments should take
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ecessary steps to ban
plastic
. These steps will stop the
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to the earth by
plastic
.
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