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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign languages is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign languages Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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In the past few years,the world has seen
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verwhelming increment in the number of people learning
a foreign languages
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a foreign language
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.some people
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 that the reason to learn foreign languages is to
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 or work in overseas countries.
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, others believe that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn
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a foreign language
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. I agree with
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 statement. On the one hand, it is true that people are keen to learn foreign languages in order to
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 or work in a foreign country. To be
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act that in recent years globalization left
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uge impact on the economy of all nations and promoted the growth of multinational companies.
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, the rise in
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umber of people working overseas resulted in an increase in the demand for learning
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.
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, people need to learn foreign languages if they want to
travel
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 across the world.
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, if people want to visit foreign countries , they have to learn basic conservation in the local language to communicate with native speakers.
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,
traveling
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 or working is not the only reasons why people learn foreign languages. People need a foreign language for their higher education.
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, many
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academic
 programs make learning a foreign language compulsory. When student
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 it, they can easily understand and appreciate
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diverse
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 cultures.
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, people learn new languages for job purpose as well.
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, many professional jobs in countries like
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Canada
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, USA, UK require IELTS ,tofel certification. And
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 but not least some people their own choice or they love it to learn foreign languages and have
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esire to improve skill. To conclude that, the number of people learning
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a foreign language
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 has
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 dramatically. These are some several reasons for
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. While some of these are work or
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travel related
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, others are purely personal or recreational in nature.
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