Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on children. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that, currently, computers are widely using.

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it is sometimes thought that

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ore damaging effect on children. In my opinion, I firmly consider

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brings more benefits than any negatives it might result. The

first

and foremost reason why I think computers are harmless because

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assists them to learn their subject in a very attractive manner.

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, children can watch many attractive educational videos, which may not be explained by either by parents or teachers

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and watch many stories and songs that are enjoyable for kids though applications,

for instance

, YouTube, WhatsApp and Facebook.

Additionally

,

this

helps them to attend online classes and they could continue their education, even in

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pandemic situation.

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how

this

device useful in academics. Another factor is that

this

device provides the young one to stay in touch and communicate with their loved one, who are away from them,

otherwise

,

this

separation can have huge repercussions to children's mind and they may be experienced some serious psychological traumas due to the physical separation. For example,

this

offers video calling and voice calling options that

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relationship alive.

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Similarly

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, Many gaming applications, which boost both mental and psychological energy and satisfy the play needs.

Therefore

, I firmly think that

this

has many merits than minor demerits. In conclusion, people have a different opinion

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whether using a computer is beneficial or not. I think it has more positives than any negatives. It is recommended that children should be supervised

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