University students always focus on one specialist subject, but some people think universities should encourage their students to study a range of subjects in addition to their own subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays some universities are requesting their students to attend
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, some people,
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their
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why I believe
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students
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main
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is
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some subjects are not useful for students
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. The students
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already
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learnt
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a range of subjects at school and it built their skills and decided which professional
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wanted to follow at the University. It will be unuseful for
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learns
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another subject
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which are not related
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his
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,
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, the biology
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at school is not relevant for a bank manager, probably he forgot everything. There no
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learn
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it at university if it is not
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related
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probably he will forget everything in the future,
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he can hates
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subject
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. The
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reason
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is that it turns the university much more expensive and the
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sees
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subject
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as a way of the university charge more fees. The private universities charge their fees by subjects,
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every more
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add
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to
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pathway turn the
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expensive. The
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can feel that he is paying extra for something
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not useful for his
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and he is wasting money and his time.
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, if the
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are
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enrolled at medicine
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and had to study financial
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he can find it unuseful and wasting his money. The
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result
will be a
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unmotivated with the
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and
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assessments
assessment
unwell developed with
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ow score. The
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must study what is attractive to him and make him interested
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the
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and search for more information. In conclusion, subjects which will not add enough
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knowledge
acknowledgement
to their
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pathway. And extra fees charge at universities for these subjects
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some
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why I do not agree
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should learn different subjects unrelated
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their
career
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at University.
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