University students always focus on one specialist subject, but some people think universities should encourage their students to study a range of subjects in addition to their own subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays some universities are requesting their students to attend

eletive

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elective

subjects different

of

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the mandatory of the

course

.

On the other hand

, some people,

inclued

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included

include

me, believe students must study only subjects related

with

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their

course

.

This

essay will give some

reason

why I believe

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students

must focus on only their specialist subjects. The

first

main

reason

is

because

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some subjects are not useful for students

career

. The students

has

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already

learnet

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learnt

learned

a range of subjects at school and it built their skills and decided which professional

their

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wanted to follow at the University. It will be unuseful for

student

learns

another subjects

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another subject

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which are not related

with

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his

course

,

for example

, the biology

subject

at school is not relevant for a bank manager, probably he forgot everything. There no

reason

for

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learn

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it at university if it is not

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related

with

student

career

probably he will forget everything in the future,

furthermore

he can hates

this

subject

. The

second

reason

is that it turns the university much more expensive and the

student

sees

this

subject

as a way of the university charge more fees. The private universities charge their fees by subjects,

thus

every more

subject

add

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to

student

pathway turn the

course

expensive. The

student

can feel that he is paying extra for something

that is

not useful for his

career

and he is wasting money and his time.

For instance

, if the

student

are

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enrolled at medicine

course

and had to study financial

subject

,

might

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he can find it unuseful and wasting his money. The

resul

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result

will be a

student

unmotivated with the

subject

and

assessements

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assessments

assessment

unwell developed with

l

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ow score. The

student

must study what is attractive to him and make him interested

about

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the

subject

and search for more information. In conclusion, subjects which will not add enough

knowledgment

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knowledge

acknowledgement

to their

student

pathway. And extra fees charge at universities for these subjects

are

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some

reason

why I do not agree

student

should learn different subjects unrelated

with

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their

career

at University.