Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think this is good for the world of sport, while others think it is a negative. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Although

it is completely normal great brands fund sports in order to

self promoting

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their marketing, some people agree with

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behavior

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, while others

states

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that

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attitude can be harmful

for

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the sports environment. I consider that sports

definetely

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definitely

needs to be funded by great organizations once

this

money

can guarantee that sports continue to exist no matter what economic conditions a country can be found. On the one hand, some believe that all the

money

used to subsidy sports is almost a necessity once without

this

financial help lot o professionals and non-professionals sports clubs could not even exist.

For example

, most of

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thletes

depends

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on their clubs to survive considering that they work in exchange to represent a sports team.

Consequently

, their clubs can not afford their salaries whether there is no sponsor behind it, which had

payed

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to expose their brands on the uniform of these athletes. So, it is important for sports that

this

money

come through companies that have interests to expose their logos thereby evaluating their brands and

consequently

offering more structure to these sports teams.

On the other hand

, there are those who think that a sponsor can be

harmfull

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harmful

to sports. In general

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it is

thougth

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thought

that

this

money

creates a colossal difference between

sport

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competitors.

For instance

, it is possible to notice nowadays that some sports teams usually receive more

money

than others

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their localization in the country or even because they have a large number of fans.

therefore

, these clubs would

attracts

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more consumers for the brands and surely developing the companies marketings.

This

creates a huge difference between the overriding core of sports which is to compete

equaly

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equally

not being considered the

ammount

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amount

a

speciffic

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specific

club can have. In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinions, I think that sports ought to continue being funded by great organizations in order to give chances for the clubs offer better conditions for their athletes and

consequently

serving as a motivation for them turning sports more and more attractive.