Obtaining a
degree
is a goal for many students you just graduated from their secondary
education
.
However
, some people believe that young people should obtain a tertiary
education
, or they should persuade
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regular or trading jobs
such
as builders, plumbers etc. I, side with those who deem that they should go to university.
On one hand, it can be argued that obtaining a
degree
is not
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guaranteed that students will have a well-paid job after graduation. Due to high competition
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the field and lack of experience, some
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ewly graduated students do not find a job very easily.
For instance
,
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research
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the University of Oxford, U.K., has shown that the rate of unemployment is higher within students with a
degree
than people who
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not hold a
degree
.
Moreover
, another factor to consider is cost. Going to a university is costly as most of the best of universities around of world is private.
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, not only is there a risk to be unemployed after graduating
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but surely young people will have a
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debt to be paid out within a few years.
Nonetheless
, I side with those who believe that young people should acquire a
degree
after finishing their secondary
education
. While a concede that there is a risk of unemployment within newly graduates, most of the students who have obtained usually have better salaries and work in a better environment than who has not sought for tertiary
education
.
For instance
, a recent study from a well-know HR company in
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SA indicated that most of the people who has a
degree
, work in a senior position after 5 years of their graduation.
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a
degree
is to acquire knowledge in a particular field. University is a place where people are able to develop their knowledge in a particular field and
this
knowledge never will be taken from them.
In other words
, tertiary students will learn subjects and expand or change their way to see the world above the average.
For instance
, if a person
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a law
degree
, he/she will know more about law and legal procedure than the average, and
this
is already an advantage in
this
modern world.
In conclusion,
although
there are some people who believe that young people should seek for stable jobs after graduating from their secondary school because of the risk of unemployment and cost of tertiary
education
, I, side with those who believe that despite
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the cost of the tertiary
education
, young people will benefit for having a
degree
as they will have better salaries and above all
they will have expertise.