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Spending on advanced computer systems by authorities is very beneficial for development but many oppose this trend. do you agree or disagree.

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Any
work
 these days are done by using computers. Authorities and government officials are
also
 started working on advanced computers. Online services made everyone to adopt
this
 culture, but few people oppose
this
 trend. In my thought, working on computers is inevitable these days and I completely oppose those who oppose
this
 trend. Before
this
 modern era, all official notes and documents are written on paper.
This
 is comfortable for some people who are used to it, but there is a lot of chances to lose them because of different events like disasters, attacks and accidents. Introduction of computers at
work place
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 changed working
time
 and style a lot. We can enter the data easily and it will be stored in servers or in
c
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loud which is impossible to destroy. Data will be accessible to anyone, anytime, at anyplace. These qualities left no choice to all authorities and workers than get used to computers. Few people oppose strongly
this
 computerisation. They believe spending
time
 advanced computers to the authorities are killing the working spirit, authorities have a chance to spend a lot of
time
 on other activities than working actual
work
. They
also
 specify that
,
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 using these computers are expensive, doing paperwork is cheaper affordable. I don't agree with them because they are completely wrong. There are no reports indicating that
work
 rate or productiveness is decreased after
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ntroduction of the computers, actually, they are in reverse. Productivity and security of data
is
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 increased all these after authorities started working on computers. These days maintaining computers are not at that expensive, they became cheaply affordable for anyone so, no need
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orry about financials. To conclude, working on computers is a necessary today and it is a very good and comfortable way to
work
, you can't change it. So spending
time
 on computers by authorities is necessary and inevitable.
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