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Some people think that politicians have the greatest influence on the world. Other people, however, believe that scientists have the greatest influence. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion.

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There is always a heated debate that what are the most influential factors around the globe. There is a group of people that asserts on the importance of
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 and the impact they have created; whereas the other group is of the view that people are more inspired and inclined towards politicians.
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 essay will discuss both perspectives in detail before reaching a final verdict. To embark upon, politicians seems to have more impact on people other than anyone in the world. The evident reason being the developments and transformations they bring in the
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. Politicians
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great responsibility of leading a
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 and a good politician can destruct or can
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 his
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 with his progressive or destructive approach.
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, the founder of Pakistan;
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 Muhammad Ali Jinnah influenced many people to demand
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a separate
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 for Muslims. Millions of people agree to his philosophy and formed
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 of Pakistan back in 1947.
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, many people argue that there is no greater influence than
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cientist, based on their out of the box mentality, unique perspective against a common phenomenon and inventions. Scientists
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 the power to bring
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rastic change in our lives.
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 phenomenon is backed up by a prominent example of the great
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 Albert Einstein. Millions of people
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 his theory of relativity and it is still taught at
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lementary level across the globe. People have no doubt
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 his inventions and consider him the father of science. To summarize the aforementioned, I opine that both professions
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 equal power. If politicians are considered to be inspiring,
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cientist cannot be overlooked.
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, I think in future, people will be more inclined towards scientists due to rapid advancements in
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echnology field.
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