Some people think the money spent on developing the technology for space exploration is not justified. There are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people hold an opinion that the national budget allocated to technological advances for exploring the universe is not worth and
instead
should be diverted to other fields. While there are some promising outcomes of investing in Linking Words
space
technology, I believe that human beings can reap more benefits when spending Use synonyms
money
on other practical aspects.
On the one hand, advocates support technology in Use synonyms
space
quests because of some reasons. Use synonyms
First
, exploration of the galaxy is a way to tackle the lack of accommodation and cater Linking Words
for
housing demands in megacities because some planets are suggested to be suitable habitats for humans in the future. Verify preposition usage
to
For example
, according to some information accumulated from Linking Words
space
satellites, mars is perceived as a promising place for humans to settle down in the Use synonyms
next
50 years due to its quite agreeable weather and the nearly equivalent amount of oxygen compared to the Earth. Linking Words
Second
, it is said that a new planet is a place for humans to exploit natural resources owing to the current paucity of natural deposits Linking Words
such
as coal. Linking Words
In particular
, scientists claim that if they were able to come up with a machine that can detect, store and deliver coal back to the Earth, people would be able to tackle the problems of generating electricity from coal.
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On the other hand
, I think that these notions are quite far-fetched and allocation will be better used in other pragmatic ways. Linking Words
Although
other celestial bodies can be Earth-like and combat overpopulation, all the ideas are only suggestions and people cannot make sure that those planets can perfectly provide ideal conditions for humans to maintain their living. Linking Words
This
means that there are still some occasions when peopleLinking Words
,
if settling on Mars, have to face inclement climatic changes and risk their lives. Remove the comma
apply
Moreover
, the Linking Words
space
on Earth is still adequate to all humans and overpopulation stems from the unequal distribution of people. Use synonyms
Therefore
, governments should pour Linking Words
money
into creating decent job opportunities in rural areas so that migrants living in big cities can return and work in their hometowns, which divides people evenly. Use synonyms
In addition
, regarding utilizing extraterrestrial resources like coal to make electricity, letting machines wander around aimlessly would be a waste of Linking Words
money
to maintain Use synonyms
this
process because humans have yet accurately mapped those unexplored regions. Linking Words
Instead
, it would be wise to sponsor nuclear plants and guarantee their safety to generate electric power because of their cheap and inexhaustible energy.
In conclusion, there are some promising outcomes of spending Linking Words
money
on technology for Use synonyms
space
exploration. Use synonyms
However
, I believe that doing so is of little value and it would be more advantageous and viable when expenditure is diverted to generate lucrative occupations in the countryside and install nuclear factories.Linking Words
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Word Count
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