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Some people say that the internet will soon become the prefered method of delivery of the news and information,causing the newspaper and magazines to gradually disappear.Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and include examples from your knowledge or experience.

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It is indeed a fact that the internet has become an integral part of the life of human beings where it has revolutionized the way of using everything including the source of news.
Hence
, some people come forward with an argument that most people will prefer to get information through electrical gadgets over manual newspaper and magazines. I agree with
this
 notion. There are numerous reasons why I believe that the way of getting magazines and newspapers will be changed.
Firstly
, It is an eco-friendly method where we can save papers which are made up of trees.
This
 can be a great contribution to decrease global warming.
Secondly
, It would be profitable for newspaper agencies as they do not have to hire an employee for delivery and pay them.
Third
 and most importantly, paper-based news can not be as quick as online news. so, people would not have to wait until
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ext morning to get a newspaper.
On the other hand
, some people assert that not all mankind are tech-savvy especially elder ones. It could be hard for them to operate a computer at
this
 age. They
also
 said that the internet could not be available and affordable to all parts, especially the people who are living in a remote area. In conclusion, looking at the present scenario, I believe that technology will make much difference for humans to acquire the way of getting news but at the same time, it will be challenging for some people.
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