These days, many fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reason for this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

There are many fathers take care of their children at their home, meanwhile, mothers
work
outside. In
this
essay, I will consider the cause and give my own point of view. Nowadays, education is fair to everyone, no matter your sex. Even there are many highly educated women who
work
at an important position in some countries.
For example
, some women holding a bachelor's degree or even
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octor's degree.
This
makes them have a competition to get a good job and
also
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igher salary.
Therefore
,
this
may cause some influence towards to traditional family member' responsibilities,
such
as
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work
outside because they can get a high pay job
instead
of fathers go to
work
.
As a result
, fathers need to stay at home and look after their children.
However
, there are some drawbacks, like fathers need to learn how to take care
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ofchildren
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of children
. It is said that men are born to
work
outside because their genes
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used to going out to found food for life before the thousand of years.
Hence
, they are more likely to
work
in a competitive
work
environment.
Moreover
, some of them do not prefer to do house works, like
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ash milk bottle, change nappy for babies.
Thus
, they need to learn how to look after their children.
For instance
, many fathers do not have an idea to treat a crying baby or child and
this
situation makes them feel annoying and confusing.
Hence
, they need to study something relating to child-rearing. In conclusion,
although
there is some reason that makes women go out to
work
,
such
as they are
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educated and can get a high pay job.
However
, I strongly believe that
this
is a disadvantage of development.
This
is because fathers need to learn the child-rearing knowledge and they are potential to go to
work
.
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