SOME STUDENTS GO DIRECTLY TO UNIVERSITY OR COLLEGE AFTER HIGHSCHOOL WHILE OTHERS TAKE A GAP YEAR TO WORK OR TRAVEL. DISCUSS AND SAY WHICH YOU PREFER

WHILE THERE ARE MANY STUDENTS WHO CHOOSE GOING STRAIGHT AHEAD TO UNDERGRADUATE PROGRAM AFTER SCHOOL

TIME

, THERE ARE

ALSO

THOSE ONES WHO WOULD RATHER MAKE A DIFFERENT CHOICE AND SPEND SOME

TIME

GETTING INTO ANOTHER PROJECT. I WOULD DISCUSS BOTH SIDES OF THE ARGUMENT BUT I WOULD SUPPORT MY OPINION ON THE LATTER TOPIC.

FIRST

AND FOREMOST I WOULD SAY THERE IS NO

FURTHER

REASON TO BE IN A RUSH ABOUT UNDERGRADUATE. IT SEEMS TO BE USEFUL HAVING A

TIME

FOCUSED IN

ANOTHER PURPOSES

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BESIDES

THE PROFESSIONALS CENTRAL AIMS. TO ILLUSTRATE

THIS

POINT I COULD SAY SOMEONE WHO

CHOOSE

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SPENDING A

TIME

IN ANOTHER COUNTRY LEARNING A

SECOND

LANGUAGE WOULD BE GRACED WITN AN UNIQUE

OPORTUNITY

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OPPORTUNITY

. AS A CONSEQUENCE,

THIS

PERSON WOULD FIND OUT A SPECIAL SPOT ON MARKET PLACE AFTER

THIS

FOREIGN EXPERIENCE.

HOWEVER

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THERE ARE THOSE PEOPLE WHO CONCENTRATE EFFORTS TO CONCLUDE FASTER THEIR FORMATION. THE REASON FOR

THIS

COULD BE FINANCIAL NEEDS. SOME PEOPLE HAVE NO MONEY SUPPORT TO INVEST TOO MUCH

TIME

IN THEIR CAREERS AS STUDENTS AND

SEEMS

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TO NEED TO HURRY UP TO GET INTO MARKET PLACE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE. THE RESULT OF

THIS

WOULD BE NO

FURTHER

PLANS

BESIDES

UNDERGRADUATION AND MARKET PLACE DIRECTLY. AS A CONCLUSION, I WOULD RESPECT BOTH OPINION BUT I WOULD SAY THERE IS NO SPENT

TIME

ON LIFE WHILE ONES ARE INVESTING ON THEIR OWN PERSONAL GROWTH. AS

MUCH

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UNIQUE OPPORTUNITIES ONE HAVE, AS MUCH WELL-TO-DO ONE WOULD BE TO GRAB/FIND WORK MARKET CHANCES.