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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extend do you agree?

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We are living in
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odern world. Where people are enjoying virtual
life
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life
. There are many people
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elieve that social networking sites have
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uge negative impact on both individuals and society. As per my view, yes, they have
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ery
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 effect of social networking.
Firstly
, the research had done that, to what extend people using
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, what they impact on people
life
. The
first
 evidence shows that 90%
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people in the world using a site and give there 100% trust on information they see into it.
This
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 chance to bad people to prove their point and curve the people thinking to there
side
.
For example
,The "alkayada" a terrorist group used
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ite to manipulate young persons and they
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brain wash
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. The youngsters are ready to do dangers attack, without thinking about
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their
life
.
Secondly
,
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 china started the rehabilitation
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 to stop
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roup to used internet because there so much addicted
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this
. The
last
 but not least, in japan the new trend started that people who are failed into
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ife of fade up with
life
. they lock tey self into
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oom. They used the internet to survive. They cannot come
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side
 from
thier
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their
 home.
This
 is stop development of
life
.
Although
, there some benefits of social networking. They can make
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ew friend into
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ntire world.Getting knowledge about cultural difference and respect those. There are many sites where you can exchange information about
this
.
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nasa
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NASA
 post news about their work and reply the audience question. In a nutshell, The social network idea was to know
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erson far away from you. But , every coin has two
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. if you loosing
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your main idea and the dark
side
 becomes heavy. So, they have to improve the base. The government and family have to eye on social networking to stop negative impact on society.
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