You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do

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Dear Manager, I am writing

this

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letter to seek your attention regarding the missing credit

card

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which was sent to me

last

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week. My name is Trinity and I have

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salary account (000000000) in your bank for the past three years.

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month, I visited the Nungambakkam branch to apply for a credit

card

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and the manager assured me that the

card

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will be delivered to my home address in two weeks after the eligibility check. As said, I received the courier

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Friday and found the

card

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missing.

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, I am worried that someone might misuse the

card

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and I will be held responsible for any payment

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due.

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, I request you to block the current

card

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that was issued for my account and

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, enquire about the missing

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, I ask you to issue a new master

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to my address at the earliest. I hope to receive a positive response from you. Yours truthfully,

Srinithi

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Trinity

Submitted by Srinithi Ramesh on Wed Sep 30 2020

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

162 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

acknowledge receipt
compromised security
unauthorized transactions
identity theft
reissue
secure (the account)
fraudulent activity
account holder
security measures
customer service
follow-up
discrepancy
escalate the issue
trace the delivery
account security
financial risk
confidential

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