You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter: • Explain why you're interested in the tour. • Ask for information about dates and prices. • Express your concerns about your fitness level.

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter in regards to the one-week walking tour in the mountains and I am highly interested in it. My name is John, I am a nature-loving person. I have seen your brochure about the walking tour in the mountains for seven days. I am willing to join you for
this
tour as it has been
long
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, I did not go for any outdoor activity.
Moreover
, I would like to get
further
information about it. Could you please tell me, when are you planning to go on a trip and how much it will cost per person?
Last
Monday, I fell down from a staircase in my house. The doctor advised me to have
the
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bed rest for ten days along with medications. I doubt that I hardly can join you
for
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this
trip, but it seems attractive to me and I wish, I could keep it up. Awaiting
for
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your kind response. Yours faithfully John
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