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Smoking is gaining widespread popularity among the youth. Discuss the reasons for this problem and give workable solutions.

#popularity #youth
Nowadays, smoking has
became
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 very popular
in
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 people, especially adults. Young people are becoming more addictive to smoking.
However
, there are some reasons
behind
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this
 problem. In
this
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I will discuss both reasons and solutions to
this
 problem. In today's world, young people are more prone to depression. Many studies
shows
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 that smoking is helpful to reduce stress.
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Weather
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this
 stress has
came
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 from family, peer pressure, or studies.
However
, the misunderstandings between parents and other family problems will result
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a poor connection with their child.
Hence
, they are not able to give time to their young kid when they needed the most.
Also
, friends  in the group could putt a strain on other group members to smoke. Refusing to smoke with peers will force them to become a part of
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oke or they are kicked out
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the party.
As a result
 of poor performance with friends and parents will
effect
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 the overall quality of
s
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tudy. They may not able to study properly. All these reasons will lead to increase stress in their minds and they will start smoking to tackle all these issues. Despite
of
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discussing the reasons
of
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 smoking in adults, some good solutions should
also
 be given. One of the best
solution
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 is to that parents should become friends with their child. They should try to be more friendly with them rather than having strict rules over them.
Moreover
, teachers in
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schools and colleges should
also
 make the class environment friendly where all students can talk to each other without any hesitation.
Furthermore
, providing physical lessons in institutions will
also
 help students to aware of
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ad effects of smoking.
This
 could include public events or seminars where
health related
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 education must be given. In conclusion, smoking is becoming very popular in modern society among younger people. Both society and parents are responsible for
this
 problem. We all should take a step forward towards
this
 game.
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