it is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. however, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sport person or musician.

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Talent

is often regarded as an innate quality of a person and

however

,that can be hereditary Sometimes.

This

special feature in a person can be related to anything ,be it from sports to music.Though its a widespread fact ,

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ertain section of society contradicts

this

belief, claiming that any child can be raised to become a master in any art and

infact

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in fact

we have abundant

real life

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examples which allure us. undoubtedly many famous personalities from various backgrounds have succeeded today in their profession just because of the attention and training that has been given to them during their childhood in their area of interests.

For example

cosnider

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consider

world

renowed

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renowned

cricketer Sachin

tendulkar

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,who is considered apex cricketer because he never fails to entice the world by his

classis

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classic

shots.The training and

hardwork

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hard work

that he has put in

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ight from his childhood, is what helped him to mould into

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best cricketer.

Although

hardwork

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hard work

really pays off at the end but its

talent

which distinguishes a person from

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est of the world.

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natural quality makes your work adorable and sets your standard apart from other pioneers. Their natural inclination towards a sport or dance makes their work look more

skillfull

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skilful

skillfully

. To

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this

statement ,we can take an example of famous

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shakuntala

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devi

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who has

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alent to memorise large numbers and ability to do complex calculations without any help of calculators.

Hence

talent

is always a special quality which is found in few

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unlike others. To conclude the topic, Some people are born with

talent

and

this

is something which cannot be developed by any training or

hardwork

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hard work

. It can be considered as a

god given

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gift for them and its not found in everyone .

This

talent

gets enriched when combined with

hardwork

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hard work

Where as

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its equally true that any child can be trained in

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art by giving all the support and to make a good musician or a

dancerout

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dancer out

dangerous

of him . So both views can be considered as true on

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ndividual line of approach.

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