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It is generally believed that the internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information. Discuss both the opinion and give your own views .

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nternet has taken the world by storm owing to its collated
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 holding capacity and acting as a medium of communication. Extending on
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nternet has to offer. I believe, while the communication ability can be deemed fruitful, the
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 it provides can be erroneous, out of context or might need some background
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 to be used efficiently.
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 is openly available to everyone. People use it post all sorts of
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, while various sites vet the data some sites don't do that.
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 offers
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 on a plethora of sources, but it can't be considered always true as anyone can enter
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 on any topic.
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, we have observed many cases on social media, where excerpts of people's post are taken out of context to bully them.
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, people have started to rely on
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nternet to diagnose their medical symptoms,
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 has been detrimental to patient's health as any treatment needs some background
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 about how a particular treatment should be administered. On the flip side, the Web can is still the best place to host the
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 that needs to be viewed as public. Various newspapers have gone online so that people can easily read them. It
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 acts as a place for collaborating
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 across various sectors.
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, StackOverflow is a site where people post technical solutions for global developers to refer to, it has definitely bolstered the development. If there was no
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nformation. In conclusion, even though we cannot completely trust everything we see on the
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, but it still is one of the best breakthroughs of the 20th century. It has facilitated better communication and
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 sharing mechanism, making our lives better.

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Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Democratize access
  • Instant messaging
  • Real-time conversations
  • Credible sources
  • Misinformation
  • Unverified facts
  • Reputable news outlets
  • Biased opinions
  • Algorithm-driven content
  • Overreliance
  • Traditional methods
  • Search engines
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