Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

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In the past thirty years, there has been an exponential growth in the
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of
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possessions. With the convenience offered by driving your own
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,
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the society into ‘one big
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jam’.
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problem becomes more apparent to the countries that have a large
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of population and
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interventions are needed to solve it.
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issue will be elaborated in the following paragraphs. With a drastic increase in
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ownership, it comes with a cost that put every
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users have to endure together.
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might be caused by the growing
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of affordable cars selections and it adds to the customer’s purchasing power.
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, in Indonesia, a
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family
car
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as Diahatsu Xenia, has been everyone’s
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because it can load up to 7 passengers and costs under 200,000,000 rupiah. In the past 10 years, more than a million Xenia cars
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been sold in Indonesia. By having
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issue, the
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has to be strategic in creating regulations to lessen the
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of
traffic
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on the
road
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. Placing a minimum
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of people in the
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could result
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less
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cars would be on the
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and encourage people to carpool.
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, in Jakarta, the local
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put a base
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of 4 seats need to be filled so the
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can pass through the metropolitan area.
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improvement in public transport
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may cause people to opt to use it than using their own transport.
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to basing the passenger
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, the
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in Jakarta, in the past five decades, has been working to improve their public transportations to be more comfortable, safe, and reliable.
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, in 2019, they successfully build MRT (Metropolitan Railway Transport) which proven to reduce the
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of people on the
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. In conclusion, with the rising of affordable cars,
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problems are unavoidable, and it happens to other cities in the world, not only Jakarta. Strict
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regulations have to be imposed to negate the amount
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traffic
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on the
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.
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, the
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has to improve
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public transport system for the people to see the benefit of using one
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of their own transportation.
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