Write about the following topics. Some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to. How true is this statement? What can tourists do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environments? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience.
Travel has been made affordable in the
last
20 years and because of this
, more destinations are available for us to choose frrom
. Correct your spelling
from
However
, many peopel
travel without knowledge Correct your spelling
people
on
the cultures and traditions of the locals which leads to various problems. Verify preposition usage
of
This
essay will discuss the two negative impacts of tourism
and provide solutions for them.
The two main problems that arises
from Change the verb form
arise
tourism
are the lack of knowledge on the customs of the locals and pollution that tourism
generates. There are many individuals who do not do their research on the countries they visit. This
,
leads to offending locals who end up Remove the comma
apply
resentting
foreigners visiting their land. Correct your spelling
resenting
resetting
For example
, locals in Bali, Indonesia, have strict religious beliefs and they find it disrespectful when foreigners disregard their practices. Locals place offerings to their ancestors along the pathways during their prayers and several tourists overlook these and kick them around. This
,
leads to anger Remove the comma
apply
amoungst
Balinese. Correct your spelling
amongst
In addition
, tourism
sectors generate great amounts of pollution that has
affected the environment on wide scales. Change the verb form
have
For instance
, plastic bottles are strewn upon beaches and roads which is an obvious display of the reckless attitudes of consumers and tourists. The impacts of tourism
has
greatly affected several nations Change the verb form
have
aound
the world both culturally and environmentally.
There are solutions that we can adopt to make travels a pleasant experience for both tourists and locals alike. Correct your spelling
around
Firstly
, travellers should read up and do their research before travelling out to their destination. They could gather information from the internet, for example
, and also
through books that have in depth
information on what is to be observed in terms of culture and traditions. Add a hyphen
in-depth
In addition
, they could also
pick up simple phrases and greetings which would definetely
impress locals. To curb the increasing pollution rates, plastic bottles could be replaced with portable bottles Correct your spelling
definitely
instead
. Also
, plastic bags could be banned by state officials and people could utilise bags that are reusuable
. These simple steps could reduce the negative outcomes of travels and Correct your spelling
reusable
also
make it more memorable.
To conclude, travels makes us wiser and broadens our knowledge. We could implement several simple steps to ensure that we look out and respect both the locals
sentiments and the land that they live in.Change to a genitive case
local's
locals'
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