A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,

#friend #house #pet #holiday #contact #instructions #care #household #duties #addresses

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Dear Maria, I hope you are doing great.

Firstly

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, I would like to thank you for accepting to

taking

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care of my pet. And

secondly

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, I will give you some information that can be useful during

this

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time: - If something bad happens, call me

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the following number - 47 99659-2296. In

others

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cases, send me a message and I will answer as soon as possible; - The dog food is on the kitchen table and you are gonna feed him twice a day, in the morning earlier and in the early evening; - When the dog has finished eating his food, you can take him for a short walk (about fifteen minutes is enough) at the

neighborhood

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and he can make poo and pee in our garden, like every day; - We have a box with plastic bags for the poop in the white closet in our entrance hall; - In the same closet there is a medicine box, where you will find some pills if the dog has some stomach problems; - And

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, feel free to eat something you like and spend some time in our house, use it was your own! I believe

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the information you need to know. Thank you again, see you soon! Marcia Mikolaiczyki 47 99659-2296

Submitted by marcia.mikolaiczyki on Thu Oct 01 2020

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

216 words

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