In some countries, governments provide payments for unemployed people. How does this impact people? Is this a positive or negative development?

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Many people believe that payment made by the
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for unemployed people has good impact and
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the help for them. But some of the people believe that it has a more negative prospect of
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trend. But it has both the prospect which can impact the
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's economy.
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, paying the unemployed people at the stage of the crisis is a good option to support them, But in the long term,it has not any great outcome. As we have been watching in
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21st century that, how the countries are dealing with
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coronavirus pandemic.
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, the countries’ economy got influenced in 2020. Many employees have gotten laid off by their organizations at the time of the world shut down. People had not enough money to pay their rents and mortgage instalments. At
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time authority planned to support the employees and provide the paycheck to protect to survive in the shutdown period till the
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will open and the businesses start hiring employees again for work.
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overnment is providing and encouraging
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some might get emphasized and stay remains jobless. which could be the bad sign for the financial system of
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ountry. And it's visible that, each family needs a regular income to survive their lives. In my opinion,
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overnment should offer works
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to pay them for sitting idea.
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way can contribute more to the economy to make stable of families.
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, I have seen in many places, where the old people even
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working and making earnings.
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overnment must be providing them sufficient pension to live and
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is obligatory in some of the countries. These big age group people really inspire among the young generation. If, they could go to earn the money at
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age
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when they are supposed to lay their backrest. In conclusion,
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overnment should support the employment at the time of trouble
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to paid them unnecessarily. If the condition of unemployment is worse in the
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dministration should create more jobs to get stability.
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