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Some people believe that the government should not support arts and other activities. However, others believe that the arts and other activities should be funded. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people opine that the elected authorities should not support arts and other activities.
On the contrary
, others believe that the arts and other activities should be encouraged through funding.In my opinion
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 pros and cons. The
government
 has many major issues which need to be solved for the betterment of people.
For instance
, we often notice that a plethora of people especially juveniles are jobless due to scarcity of job opportunity.
Hence
,the administration should focus on it
as
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riority rather than funding the arts and other activities.
Additionally
, due to steep in population in many parts of the country
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it is seen that at many places due to improper road construction people are facing a lot of hurdles and ultimately leading to air and noise pollution.
Therefore
, it is imperative for the
government
 to maintain pristine and proper roads.
Moreover
,
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 of funding arts
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elected officials should look after the poor families by funding them with the basic needs.
However
, funding arts has
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 too.It represents the country's history through mesmerizing
potrays
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portrays
 and arts.
In addition
, many countries economies depend upon tourism.Arts and other activities
also
 act as a centre of attraction to many foreigners.
Further
, arts and other activities serves as a bread and butter for many people. To conclude, in my view, the
government
 should not spend much money
in
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 arts and other activities as
such
 it should not cost an arm or a leg.
On the contrary
, elected authorities prime motive should be helping and providing
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itizen with more job opportunities, fulfilling the basic needs of the poor and proper maintenance of the roads.
Therefore
, the
government
 should maintain a proper balance in funding the arts.At the same time,they should
also
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citizen needs.
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