Write about the following topic. Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
In
these
world of digitalisation, mass Correct determiner usage
this
media
plays a
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an
ital
role Correct your spelling
vital
to broadcast
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in broadcasting
news
coverage infractiona
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infraction
infractions
infraction a
raction
of minutes. Nexus of the eporter is so strong, that celebrities feel as if they are intrusive in their personal activity. Correct your spelling
fraction
action
This
essay will examine both viewpoints in details
. There is always a debate that a few famous personalities are exploited by social Fix the agreement mistake
detail
media
and some news
channels.There is no regulatory body for various media
to have control over their telecast, populace
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the populace
are
so influenced that they Change the verb form
is
did
not check Wrong verb form
do
about
their credibility. Change preposition
apply
This
news
spread like air in this
world of technology. For instance
, to increase there
television rate popularity, sometimes Correct your spelling
their
media
exaggerate the ruth
, and sometimes it happens after the Correct your spelling
truth
news
stars have to declare the right information from their social media
account. Being star
,their life is always in Add an article
a star
limelight
. As a celebrity, they are always in the Correct article usage
the limelight
lass
house. Superstars and the Correct your spelling
last
edia
are like two sides of one coin. When people achieve any milestones they want Correct your spelling
media
journalist
to cover their stories on Add an article
a journalist
the journalist
front
page, but they do not like coverage of their personal life. Many times they avoid speaking about their relationships in front of Add an article
the front
media
. For example
, currently
Bollywood famous star reha Add a comma
currently,
chkravarty
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Chakravarty
is
arrested by the Wrong verb form
has been
arcotic
department, Correct your spelling
narcotic
narcotics
arctic
media
is doing her job of covering minute details about her, for which their parents'
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parents
gave
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have
application
in court to stop Replace the word
applied
this
broadcasting as they are against it. In
my perspective, though stardom Change preposition
From
have
always been in Change the verb form
has
glass
house, still there should be censorship Add an article
a glass
the glass
on
Change preposition
of
media
by Government
to control their activities. Being popular is not a crime, they Correct article usage
the Government
also
have a personal life which they may not want to disclose publicly.To simplify, when two celebrities get married, media
tries to cover even their personal close momentsCorrect article usage
the media
in
their camera which should beChange preposition
with
stoped
. Correct your spelling
stopped
To conclude
, nowadays the ntertainment
industry is the Correct your spelling
entertainment
iggest
industry, people Correct your spelling
biggest
interested
in watching about their favourite Add a missing verb
are interested
personality
, but that does not mean reporters Fix the agreement mistake
personalities
to
become a Fix the infinitive
apply
etective
and expose personal information. There should be some Correct your spelling
detective
restriction
on Fix the agreement mistake
restrictions
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite