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The handwriting has become less formal than it was in the past. What are the causes for this? Is it s positive or negative development?

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Compared to past writing with the hand is less conventional now. The reasons for the prevailing situation are the advancement in technology and the time-saving factor it brings in to our day to day life.
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ast decade or so, their dependence on communication technology at the present juncture is obvious. Mainly because it helps to save time and reduce process requirements. Innovations including emails, chat, live video sharing are all ample example to prove the emergence of an innovated lifestyle. Considering the quest of human beings to make their hectic schedules easy and comfortable there is no wonder that snail mails have lost their relevance. Progress always comes at a price. Letter writing is an art which we develop from the middle school level. The worrying fact is that when the acceptance of its irrelevance in adult or professional life becomes prominent it will be just a matter of time for
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 old ability to disappear.
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 will affect the creativity and imagination of emerging generations which in turn will make their life colourless and monotonous. So, keeping
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 precious art alive should be a responsibility rather than just being part of a job. Handwriting is definitely losing its prevalence. The essay discussed how technological advancement has been the main culprit for the age-old formality to lose its popularity and it has
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 a marvellous craft. To conclude, all the mentioned factors clearly suggest the benefits the new technological innovations possess over a traditional way of formal communication.
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