Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your opinion.

In a few companies, it is necessary that the workers wear the office
uniform
all the time.
Firstly
,
this
essay discusses
a
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benefit of
this
phenomenon,
that is
to say
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the increased
sense
of
unity
uniforms provide.
Then
it gives an account of one disadvantage of it, which is the
sense
of
monotony
uniforms can cause for employees. Afterwards, it drives home the point that overall it is a welcome trend as the increased
unity
brought by uniforms is strengthening and the problem of
monotony
is insignificant. Uniforms are a great tool for increasing the
sense
of
unity
in workplaces. When employees dress in the same kind of attire, they feel that they are a team.
Thus
, the
sense
of
unity
among them increases.
For example
, according to a comparative study by a human psychology website, in the U.S.A., the
sense
of collective identity in the companies that had uniforms was 10 times stronger than that in the companies that did not have uniforms. A disadvantage of wearing uniforms at all times is that they can become a source of
monotony
for employees. Humans have a tendency towards not sticking to one thing. If a thing becomes a routine, it starts to become a source of
monotony
as well.
Similarly
, if the employees of a
company
have to wear a
uniform
all the time, they can find their dressing boring.
For instance
, a survey by UniformOrNot.Com concludes that according to 40%
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employees in the U.K., uniforms are a tedious thing.
This
essay is of the opinion that wearing uniforms at all times is very advantageous and hardly disadvantageous. The increased
unity
among employees resulting from a
uniform
enhances the overall performance of the
company
.
On the other hand
, the
monotony
arising out of it can easily be eliminated by providing employees with a few sources of entertainment in the office. To give evidence, ABC
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. ltd. just revealed that after the establishment of music rooms in its offices, its employees hardly ever felt the
monotony
of the
uniform
.
Also
, as expected, the
uniform
strengthened the bonds between the employees, and the
company
's performance was always on the rise. In conclusion, uniforms unite the employees of a
company
better, so they are good to have. A few sources of entertainment in the workplace can easily kill the
monotony
resulting from them (uniforms).
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • uniforms
  • staff
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • promotes
  • belonging
  • team spirit
  • professional
  • cohesive
  • image
  • security
  • identification
  • reduces
  • expenses
  • employees
  • decide
  • wear
  • fosters
  • equality
  • minimizes
  • differences
  • individuality
  • self-expression
  • uncomfortable
  • restrictive
  • body types
  • sizes
  • maintenance
  • cleanliness
  • control
  • restriction
  • personal style
  • fashion preferences
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