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Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #media #privacy #price #fame #invasion #life
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 has been always a hot topic that journalists do not treat celebrities well and for that
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there could be numerous reasons. It is
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 believed by many that stardom takes
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oll from their personal life whereas many say that they should be considered as
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ormal human being and should be provided more privacy. People who are known by masses are known as stars. They have millions of followers who are interested to know more about their idols
as a result
 media try to collect more and more information
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 these people which many times lead to
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 their personal space. Many of my friends follow social media sites pages which are dedicated to
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 updates of celebrities' every
actions
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. They enjoy
such
 types of news and to fetch
such
 information a lot of journalists
work
 round the clock and chase VIPs due to which an intrusion into famous people privacy. On the other side, Celebrities or
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 persons are doing their job, the only difference is that their
work
 can be seen by many and appreciated by masses which does not mean that one
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uthorization to disturb them at any time. In my opinion, we should respect their lives and personal space. Apart from their
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 they
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 a life which is not connected to their
work
 but with their near and dear one and as like anyone they
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 need privacy.
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